Happy New Year's Eve!

Happy New Year's Eve!!! I am still working on my story and will hopefully post tonight. I made it a goal and I hope to achieve it. I hope everyone has had a great Christmas and will have a great New Year's eve!!

I had a great Christmas and now for new year's eve. I will be out later tongiht with co-workers for dinner and then to a friends house to bring in the new year.

Alright, going to work on my story now.

Tempoary Writers Block

Happy Holidays!

I have been writing and I'm kinda stuck at the moment about one part. It may take a little longer to post but I hope to have it up soon! Also this part that will be posted soon may need a lot of work on it but I will do my best.

In The Attic

Ok, sorry for not posting for awhile but i did some writing today. I was hoping to post it earlier but I went and got a tattoo. Anyways I hope this part makes sense and the last part I wrote will not be there. I will be taking some time off but will post to let everyone know what I'm up to.

“Unless all evil prevailed?” What does that mean? Matt said.

“Honey, is everything alright? You seem scared of something, anything you want to talk about? Asked Matt’s mom.

“No, I’m okay and things will be alright. I don’t understand some of this stuff in the book but maybe figuring out what to do will help”

Matt flips through the book that was written by the queen and some of the pages were blank.

“Why are the pages in the back of the book blank Mom?” asked Matt

“I’m not sure and I could never figure out why and neither could your father.”

I do remember my parents telling me a story but I only remember vague details and it had to do with something in another country and a potral or gate to another world, said his mom.

A portal or gate? Another world? Why because you and dad told me there was one way to get to Silver city and it was in Greece? There’s another way? Asked Matt

It is in Greece but I’m having trouble remembering the exact location. A few eek safer I was told the story by my parents, I was ambushed and knocked unconscious so I can only remember a few things but maybe if I think about it long enough I may remember.

“Thanks Mom, any help is great and I need to see Klohe so I will be at her house.

Hope you liked it! :)

Time off

Sorry for not posting like I said I would.

I am going to take some time off and write a lot but make sure it will be great! I will post tomorrow and then take time off to perfect my story. Thank you to who ever left that comment and it's a great idea! I won't be gone long but just want everyone to know what my plans are.

Soon I will be on vacation and I will be able to write without any interuptions.

Thank You

I wanted to thank everyone that left a comment for me to have a happy Thanksgiving and Hope that all of you did have a great Thanksgiving too! I will be posting tomorrow for my story but I decided that the last bit I wrote will be taken out since it didn't gel with what I had already written.

I hope all of you are safe if you are shopping today, I know it was crazy at 10pm for Walmart last night.

The Legend

Here is an update, I may re-write it again because I don;t like the very last part of it but let me know what you think of it.

As Sakura found out the truth of King Nathan and his family, she started a book and would hope that her spell would help keep evil away when it would be buried.  Nica had threatened Sakura one day in the country.

Sakura was going for a walk on her parents property in the country and  Nica had found her.

“Well well, it is you that has fallen in love with my brother who will be king but I deserve to be Queen!!!” Nica said.

“I don’t think you deserve to be queen Nica!” said Sakura

“I may not deserve it but I do and I will make you pay for it with death and your unborn child!” Nica said

“Brrrawwww…darkness follows while laughter hids where no light shall shine, bring forth evil on the unborn child of Sakura and the king, my brother” Nica shouted while jumping around Sakura in a wild dance.

Sakura didn’t know what to make of it but she went home and penned what happened into the book along with the incantation that Nica said, Sakura hoped that her unborn child would not die and that the child would be strong enough to bring down Nica When the time would come.

Sakura never told the king about the encounter and only told him of the news she was with child. Sakura wanted to be happy and have a happy life with her husband and their unborn child.

8 months had passed and the Sakura went into labor for many hours, she was in pain for she decided on a natural birth and wanted the child to come into the world free of any medicine that was may have been used.

Pumpkin Festival and writing

Thank You to everyone!!!!!

I love the feedback and will be doing more writing and hope I can post the next part by Sunday. It's a goal but if I can't it will be posted by next week.

I went to the Pumpkin Festival and had fun plus I did spend too much money but it was all good. So for now I will be writing more.

Revised September 16th

I re-wrote the last part of my story from September 16th, it has been revised and I am still writing more but for now I will post what I have. Hope this time it makes more sense to all of you that follow me and the story.

“Mom where is the book that has all the history of Silver City in it?” asked Matt

“ I think it is in the attic but be careful because the roof is leaking into the attic” said Jen.

Matt ran up the stairs to the second floor and then went to his left and by his room. The attic door was only 5 more feet and he wanted to find the book that held every piece of information on Harper and Klohe plus about the city as well.

Matt reached the door to the attic and opened it and went two steps at a time to get inot the attic and his mom was right about the roof leaking. It was wet and soggy in some areas in the attic but all the rain didn’t help either.

“Why is there so much stuff in this attic?” Matt asked outloud.

Matt looked at everything while he was looking for the book containing all the information and on that he needed to look at. He passed paintings of the royal family, Lords and Ladies and a painting of Matt and Klohe when they were babies.

Matt admired the painting then moved on in the attic.

He finally found the trunk which stood out amongst everything. The trunk was made of cherry wood and had rubys along the edge that glowed when light was shinning in through the window. This trunk was locked but Matt had the key around his neck as did his parents.

When Matt opened the trunk, the book was on top, he grabbed it and sat down on the floor to read through about everything or at least find out why Harper and Klohe were separated.

In the book:

King Nathan and his sister Nica very different in many ways even though they were related by blood. Nica was into dark magic and wanted to rule in her evil ways and make everyone slaves. Her vision was a dark world and dominate every country and conquer earth.

King Nathan was the first born and he was crowned King while Nica was always second best. She hated her brother because her parents like him better. Nathan had a heart and the city loved him and his parents did too.

“We will see the end of days, I will be queen when the time is right! I will take your first born child and raise them as my own and bring this city to it’s knees and crumble!” said Nica to Nathan at his corination.

‘I see you have turned evil through and through in your body Nica, that is a shame and I will now banish you from the city for all eternity so you can not walk here when you are dead. You will never know who my first born is and we will fight you if you even try to harm the city” said Nathan.

With All Nathan sai, he has Nica escorted out of the palace and had the guards put shackels on her, they brought her to the outer most edge of the city where she would live in hiding and not be allowed back into the city.

King Nathan had been looking for a wife so he could settle down and start his own family. One day while he was out iding, he met a young woman named Sakura and he fell in love.

Of course this wasn’t happily ever after, Sakura found out the truth about Nica and was afraid her unborn child would be stolen. Sakura decided to start this book, keep all the secrets in it about the city and about the royal family. It was to be buried and never be found unless all evil prevailed.

Still have more to write to this but I wanted to share it anyways and always love feedback! Hope you enjoy.

More on Friday

I just wrote a lot and yea it deleted itself. I will be posting by friday and will redo the last part to "The Legend". Going to get some sleep but keep looking on Friday!

New Computer

Well I have once again neglected my story but I will be getting a new computer tonight!!! I will work on it this week and get it posted soon. I wanted to work on it today but I didn't have time.

Anyways I will have something posted soon.

Thank You

Hi everyone, I have a cold and had a sore throat but it's gone. I have read your comments and I like that you guys are pointing things out to me. It's also good that it's not making any sense and is confusing all of you.

I don't remember  if I was tired when I wrote it, I may have been but I will go back and rewirte it again. I will try not to give too much information all at once.

Not sure when I will post again but hopefully soon or maybe in October.

New writing

 Here is what I have and not sure the last part of it makes sense or I repeated myself. I am going to write more and maybe fix the end where I left off. Sorry for not posting for awhile but I have been exhausted with work but I will do my best to post every Friday.


Thank you all for commenting and leaving feedback for me, it helps me and I really love the feedback!!!






After walking Klohe to her house, Matt left and went home to ask his parents about things that were going on plus about Harper and who she really was.


Matt’s parents were part of the royal guard and were part of a stealth force to protect Klohe when the twins were split up at birth. Matt and his parents went to earth to keep a watchful eye on Klohe.


Matt didn’t know any of the history of Silver City until he was 8 years old and he made the same oath as his parents to protect Klohe. Matt has kept this secret from Klohe in order to protect her.


“Mom, there is a new girl at school and her name is Harper” Matt said


“Not the same Harper as Klohe’s twin?” Jen asked (Matt’s mom)


“ I believe so, Klohe says they look a lot like and Harper keeps staring at her in class”.


“Please tell me the story again why they were separated at birth” Matt asked.


“It s with the king and his sister, related by blood but different in many ways.”




August, the king had a sister who was into evil arts and practiced them. Her name was Nica and she had her eye on the throne since August became king.  

Nica had tried to poison the king and his wife but they had a spy that forworned them and they lived but knew when the queen was with child that they would have to go into hiding til the child was 18 years of age.



Matt is Klohe’s childhood friend and lover Matt grew up with Klohe but his family was sent to live near the royal princess to protect her. Matt’s parents were guards back in the city and when the twin girls were born they were seperated after a few short days.

Klohe was calm and loving but when you were around Harper, you could feel evil rolling off of her and this is why the girls were seperated. Harper lived in Europe for years and Klohe lived in America, now they have come face to face.

Klohe’s parents were not happy when they had to seperate the twin girls but they knew it had to be done and they had to take Klohe and go into hiding.

Ahhh

So I had done more writing and some it decided to delete itself!!!! I will have to write more and hopefully post tomorrow.

New stuff

Well since the hurricane didn't hit and I have been working all week has left me very exhausted! I did write some but it's not a lot so the next time I post I hope to have more for everyone.

Here is what I have:

“This woman was speaking to me and she said my twin! I don’t have a twin but is everything around me not true Matt?” Klohe asked desperately.


“I’m not sure  Klo and these visions that you keep having are becoming more frequent and I am starting to get scared for you.” Matt said.


“They are not that frequent Matt and besides you can walk me home since school is out. My grades are good and the visions are not often, just today,” said Klohe.

“I know but still, you mentioned Harper and she does look like you a lot and then you are hearing people call out to you and this all happens Klohe.......help us.....help your city! yelled someone in the distance that was fading fast.

Your twin is.............

The person saying all of this finally dissapeared and Klohe came back to reality with Matt staring right at her.

“Klohe?” asked Matt

“What? Where did she go?” asked Klohe

“Where did who go Klo?” asked Matt who was looking at Klohe strange.today when a teacher tells you about a lost city. “

“This is starting to get to plus your lack of sleep doesn’t help either” Matt said.


Klohe thought about what Matt said while they were walking home from school and he was right about Harper looking like Klohe a lot even though they were not related to eachother.


“You are right about Harper Matt and I’m not related to her at all” said Klohe.


Matt was thinking while Klohe talked and she didn’t have a clue that Harper was Klohes twin and he was not sure why Harper would come here either, 

Matt needed to investigate after walking Klohe to her house.

This is what I have and not sure where it will go from here but I will get that figured out tonight.

Hurricane

I may not post for a week because hurrican Irene is coming up the coast and the eye of the storm is supposed to go over my town. Im not happy about this. Not sure if we will lose power either but need to be safe.

Will try to post soon but may not til after the hurricane.

Posting

Thank you to everyone that has left feedback!!!! I will try to post on Friday this week and hopefully post weekly from now on.

More Writing!

Since my friends mom cleaned the house, I stayed home because I knew she would put me to work on my vacation. I wrote a lot more and hope I have answered some of the questions that some people brought up.

I added a new character, well actually 2 new characters. One is Harper and the other is Nannaoo pronounced nana-ooh but it may change later.
 Well here it is:

“Well then I am Harper, nice to meet you....?” Harper said.


“I am Klohe, nice to meet you too” said Klohe.


With the introductions out of the way, Harper kept staring at the science teacher and Klohe didn’t like it even though she felt comfortable around Harper.


“Did Harper have magical powers?” Klohe thought.


“Class, can I have your attention please?” asked Mr. August


Everyone stopped talking to give Mr. August their full attention. Mr. August was tall and had a bad leg so he walked with a cane. He wore glasses and his hair was dishelved.


“I want to teach you about a legend that was passed down to me by my parents. This legend has a powerful city in it with a royal type family and only they can activate the true power of the city.” Mr. August said.


With this small amount of a legend Mr. August had everyone’s attention. 

When Mr. August smiled, it was in a creepy way but he only smiled at Harper.


 Klohe raised her hand to ask where the city was and she was not called on. 

Klohe didn’t know why Mr. August didn’t call on her but what she did notice was everyone in the class looking straight ahead and not saying a word.


This was unusual for Klohe’s science class because everyone always talked but now they were silent, even Harper was but she was smiling, why?


“I want everyone to take notes on this because there will be a quiz onit later in the week” said Mr. August.


As my parents told me this story, I listened everytime they told it to me. The city is in another dimension and the only way to get there is by a secret entrance only located somewhere in Greece. My parents didn’t know how to get to the secret opening but they told me you need “royal blood”. The royal family rules the city in a polite manner, everyone got along and were happy except for one royal who was not happy. This royal’s name is Nannaoo. She did not like the way this hidden city that is surrounded by water was being ruled.


 Nannaoo wanted to rule differently and make everything dark where nothing would grow and everyone would be miserable. She always liked the dark side of things and she wanted to kill the heir to Silver Star City.


Nannaoo’s brother had found out and left his oldest son in charge so he could take his wife and daughter who was the heir to the city, take them away to safety and wait til the young girl would be old enough to gain her powers and knowledge.


No one knows why the oldest son was left in charge, some say he was very strong and could stand up to Nannaoo but the real challenge was for his sister to put her away for good.


Since the departure of the king and queen and their daughter, no one has seen them or knows where they went. I was told the daughter would gain powers over the waters and be able to control them anyway she would like, she could move mountains and move the city by herself but there is no proof for she has not returned to the city.


Some say Nannaoo has people working for her that like the dark side and say they have tracked down the heir to Silver Star City and will destroy her and her parents to keep everything dark, that is why we keep having rain and no sunshine as my parents would tell me.


“So are there any questions before you go?” asked Mr. August


“Mr. August, if the heir is still alive, how did the story get out?” asked a student finally out of her gaze of zombieness.


“I asked my parents the same thing and they told me they followed a traveler into the city and were told the story by the traveler but in no means, follow strangers” said Mr. August.


Ring....Ring...Ring...


“Off you go now, get to your next class” said Mr. August as the bell rang letting students know they had another class to get to.


Klohe gathered up her things and out of the corner of her eye she could see Harper smile at her evilily, Klohe didn’t know what to make of it but she wanted to find Matt and talk to him about her. Matt may know something about it but she would ask her brother Chris too.


Klohe left the classroom and turned right as she went out the door, she knew Matt was in science class and it was not too far from her class. As she got there Matt walked out.


“Matt, we need to talk right now!” said Klohe very seriously.


“Wow Klohe, nice to see you too but what’s up with you? Matt asked while Klohe was pulling him out into the hallway.


“Sorry Matt but something weird happened in my class and I think you might know about it. Even the teacher is creepy and gives me evil looks plus a new girl named Harper showed up today and she seems to be in love with the teacher.”


“Slow down Klohe and start again, who is Harper?” asked Matt even though he has heard the name somewhere but couldn’t remember where.


“Harper is a new girl but not sure where she is from. She kinda looks like me but has brown eyes and darker brown hair. Even the teacher smiled at her which is weird and he always looks at me from behind his computer.”


“Also my teacher told the class of a legend that his parents told him about a city surrounded bu water and the only way to get there is to find the entrance in Greece.” said Klohe


“I have never heard of that Klo, besides how would the teachers parents know that the secret location is in Greece? I think he made the story up and just wants to test everyone’s brain activity” said Matt


“Why are you so concerned about this legend Klohe?” asked Matt


“I’m not sure, it feels like this hidden city is calling to me, saying help us.......” Klohe trailed off as she had a vision of Harper sitting on a throne chair and ruling the city.

This is what I have done on my vacation, love the feedback and I hope you like it.

Computer Problrems

I was going to post what I wrote yesterday but my computer is acting up so I hope I cam get it and prnt it out. Not sure why my computer is being like this but I am going to try and reme.ber what I wrote and write it on paper. Will update when I can.

A Few Surprises

Fisrt I want to thank everyone that comment on my story and it helps me too. Thank you!!!!
Second: My cousin gave birth to a baby girl yesterday and I can't wait to meet Alexis!

I did more writing today and I'm happy with it. My next challenge will be to move it forward but the good news is I have answered some of the questions that people left when they commented on my posts.

I have been watchin past seasons of Hell's Kitchen and writing at the same time. I hope to post what I have witten and hope to move the story foward more.

Did write plus it is beautiful out!

I did write more to my story finally and I am happy plus the weather outside is beautiful!!!! I will be taking a 8 day vacation from work and I hope to write alot while on vacation plus work on my tan.

I added a new character to the story but I haven't named them but it's ok because it can be a mystery until I figure out the name. Also I do need to move the plot a little more because I think I am taking to long to get to the legend and the history behind it. That will be my goal, to write more on vacation and move the plot ahead.

Here it is:

After Math class, Klohe was walking down the hall to her next class when Jane bumped right into her as she rounded a corner for the science hall.


“Klohe! I am so sorry about bumping into you and about earlier but I think Matt is a bad influence on you and I really think he will hurt you.” said Jane


“Hi Jane, look I have know Matt since I was little and I trust him completely and I don’t understand why you can’t just be happy for me Jane” said Klohe


“You had the dream again, didn’t you?” asked Jane


“I did and I have extra Math homework because I fell asleep in class....” Klohe was interupted when Matt came around the corner behind Jane. Jane jumped about a foot in the air when Matt yelled....”Boo!”


“Matt! I hate you!!!” yelled Jane


“That is nothing new from yo Jane besides what are you doing in the hallway? Don’t you have some boy to impress?” asked Matt


“No I don’t and I was talking with Klohe, it’s girl talk so buzz off” said Jane with an attitude of a girl who doesn’t like to be told no.


“Stop both of you! I don’t like it when you guys act like this and really if you hate eachother that much, just marry eachother! I have science class to get to and have other things to do”


Klohe walked down to her science class and took her seat in the back where she always sits. The science teacher was weird just as everyone said.


The science teach looked over the top of his computer at Klohe but she could only see his eyes. He did this everytime she had science class and Klohe was not sure why but he did make her feel uncomfortable.


A new girl walked in  with loose curls that was a deep chestnut color. She had bright brown eyes and a smile that made you feel comfortable in her presence. Klohe and he saw her hand a piece of paper to the science teacher he just nodded.


The new girl came to the back where the desks were and asked Klohe if she could sit down.


“Hi, mind if I sit here?” the new girl asked


“No, you can sit down” Klohe said.


Klohe could not take her eyes off this new girl but she didn’t know why and what was drawing Klohe to this girl? Klohe didn’t know how to open her mouth and ask the girl who she was and where she was from only because Klohe could not take her eyes off of her.

That is all I have for now but I will write some more tomorrow and the rest of the week and hopefully be able to post it.

More to write

I was hoping to post yesterday but I haven't written anything since my last post. I have been at work and home and got inspiration from both places. I hope to post more on Monday and if I don't, I will post Tuesday.

Staying Home

Normally i would be at the movie theater tonight to watch anime but I think I will stay home and do some writing. I went to Water Country yesterday and went to my cousins baby shower today so I am very tired.

I am hoping to post by Wednesday with more for my story. I may have to go to bed early cause I am falling asleep. Lots to do.

Writing

So I did more writing and still working on it.

here it is:

“Hey Klohe, what is wrong?” asked Matt.


Matt walked up behind Klohe and could tell by her slouching that something was upsetting her. Matt always knew when Klohe was upset or sad and he could feel every emotion she was having when he would get close to her.


“Nothing is wrong Matt, just Mary being the jealous person she is. You know how she is and it’s ok, nothing to worry about. How are you?” asked Klohe


“Well then, I should walk you to your class or you will be late and besides I am much better company than Mary. Did you find anything interesting in the book I lent you?” asked Matt.


As they walked down the hall to Klohe’s class, Klohe tried to remember but was the symbols she saw. She could not remeber anything else.


“The symbols look familar to me but I don’t know what they mean and there is a riddle with my family’s legend. I feel like I should know what it means but I don’t and it’s frustrating!” said Klohe


They walked down the science hall and made a right turn to the math is was Klohe’s first hall, this was Klohe’s first class and Matt had science class.

That's what I wrote and I'm hungry so I will be making dinner. I will try to post more next week or sooner if I can. Thanks for reading my stuff! :)

More

I did more writing but it's not a lot. I'm having temporary writers block. Anyways I hope this is good and gives some insight to who "Matt" is. Hope you like it.

“Mary! You don’t know anything about Matt at all and you judge him from the outside and don’t want to know him! I think you are jealous because Matt is my childhood friend and he knows me better than you!” Said Klohe.



“What ever Klohe, I know Matt well and he is just manipulating you and you are letting him. I have to get to class since I have a test, I will see you later.”




Klohe never understood Mary and why she was always jealous of Matt. Matt was a kind guy who cared for Klohe and really knew her better than Mary. Matt and Klohe have been friends from birth with the same birthday and grew up together..


When Matt was around Klohe, she felt safe with him and felt warm inside. Even though they are not around each other like they used to be, Klohe still feels safe when Matt is around. Klohe could never guess why but it has been that way since they were born.

I'm not sure if this was 250 words but I will try writing more and post it next week Monday. I hope to make it longer too. Oh, if I am missing punctuation marks or anything like it just let me know.

Not too Bad

I have been a little stressed out lately, it's over my student loans but I am doing better now. I have done some more writing and will post it up. I hope it makes sense and that I didn't stray from my story line either.

Other than writing, working and sleeping, not much is new but the weather has been nice and it's not humid anymore :). Here is more of my story, if anything was repeated I do apologize.

She remembered why and she still couldn’t figure out the symbols but she pushed it aside and got ready for school. She picked out a long sleeve shirt that was red and a pair of jean pants for school and her hair was straight.

Klohe met up with her friend Mary on the way to school but she didn’t notice because Klohe’s mind was on her family legend.

Why are some of the symbols familar to me? I don’t get it and everytime I look at the symbol for water, I see water not in reality but in my mind and it surrounds me. Why? Thought Klohe.

Hello?! Klohe?!?! Earth to Klohe! said Mary

These thoughts that were running through Klohe’s mind were keeping her up late at night. It made her feel more like herself, like where she belonged and these symbols were calling to her. Finally Klohe noticed her friend Mary trying to get her attention.

Hi Mary, sorry just my “family legend” they both said in unison.

I know Klohe but you really need to give it a rest and study for school, your grades are not that great and if you want to go to Duke University, you need to get your grades up! Besides, how much sleep did you get last night? I can tell you were up late, said Mary.

I know Mary and I was up until 4:20am, Matt gave me a book on legends and my family legen.....

Wait, what?! Matt gave you the book!? Mary asked shocked.
Yes he did, he is not a bad guy Mary! He is my friend and he thought I might like to read up on legends and read about my family’s legend, said Klohe.

Matt is not to be trusted at all and he is only after you because he knows how to manipulate you! You need to stay away from him Klohe! Mary said.

Let me know what you think even if you didn't like it! I am now going to do a few things and relax since I have the weekend off and do more writing.