Friday, September 23, 2011

Thank You

Hi everyone, I have a cold and had a sore throat but it's gone. I have read your comments and I like that you guys are pointing things out to me. It's also good that it's not making any sense and is confusing all of you.

I don't remember  if I was tired when I wrote it, I may have been but I will go back and rewirte it again. I will try not to give too much information all at once.

Not sure when I will post again but hopefully soon or maybe in October.

Friday, September 16, 2011

New writing

 Here is what I have and not sure the last part of it makes sense or I repeated myself. I am going to write more and maybe fix the end where I left off. Sorry for not posting for awhile but I have been exhausted with work but I will do my best to post every Friday.

Thank you all for commenting and leaving feedback for me, it helps me and I really love the feedback!!!

After walking Klohe to her house, Matt left and went home to ask his parents about things that were going on plus about Harper and who she really was.

Matt’s parents were part of the royal guard and were part of a stealth force to protect Klohe when the twins were split up at birth. Matt and his parents went to earth to keep a watchful eye on Klohe.

Matt didn’t know any of the history of Silver City until he was 8 years old and he made the same oath as his parents to protect Klohe. Matt has kept this secret from Klohe in order to protect her.

“Mom, there is a new girl at school and her name is Harper” Matt said

“Not the same Harper as Klohe’s twin?” Jen asked (Matt’s mom)

“ I believe so, Klohe says they look a lot like and Harper keeps staring at her in class”.

“Please tell me the story again why they were separated at birth” Matt asked.

“It s with the king and his sister, related by blood but different in many ways.”

August, the king had a sister who was into evil arts and practiced them. Her name was Nica and she had her eye on the throne since August became king.  

Nica had tried to poison the king and his wife but they had a spy that forworned them and they lived but knew when the queen was with child that they would have to go into hiding til the child was 18 years of age.

Matt is Klohe’s childhood friend and lover Matt grew up with Klohe but his family was sent to live near the royal princess to protect her. Matt’s parents were guards back in the city and when the twin girls were born they were seperated after a few short days.

Klohe was calm and loving but when you were around Harper, you could feel evil rolling off of her and this is why the girls were seperated. Harper lived in Europe for years and Klohe lived in America, now they have come face to face.

Klohe’s parents were not happy when they had to seperate the twin girls but they knew it had to be done and they had to take Klohe and go into hiding.

Friday, September 9, 2011


So I had done more writing and some it decided to delete itself!!!! I will have to write more and hopefully post tomorrow.

Friday, September 2, 2011

New stuff

Well since the hurricane didn't hit and I have been working all week has left me very exhausted! I did write some but it's not a lot so the next time I post I hope to have more for everyone.

Here is what I have:

“This woman was speaking to me and she said my twin! I don’t have a twin but is everything around me not true Matt?” Klohe asked desperately.

“I’m not sure  Klo and these visions that you keep having are becoming more frequent and I am starting to get scared for you.” Matt said.

“They are not that frequent Matt and besides you can walk me home since school is out. My grades are good and the visions are not often, just today,” said Klohe.

“I know but still, you mentioned Harper and she does look like you a lot and then you are hearing people call out to you and this all happens your city! yelled someone in the distance that was fading fast.

Your twin is.............

The person saying all of this finally dissapeared and Klohe came back to reality with Matt staring right at her.

“Klohe?” asked Matt

“What? Where did she go?” asked Klohe

“Where did who go Klo?” asked Matt who was looking at Klohe when a teacher tells you about a lost city. “

“This is starting to get to plus your lack of sleep doesn’t help either” Matt said.

Klohe thought about what Matt said while they were walking home from school and he was right about Harper looking like Klohe a lot even though they were not related to eachother.

“You are right about Harper Matt and I’m not related to her at all” said Klohe.

Matt was thinking while Klohe talked and she didn’t have a clue that Harper was Klohes twin and he was not sure why Harper would come here either, 

Matt needed to investigate after walking Klohe to her house.

This is what I have and not sure where it will go from here but I will get that figured out tonight.