Hi everyone, I have a cold and had a sore throat but it's gone. I have read your comments and I like that you guys are pointing things out to me. It's also good that it's not making any sense and is confusing all of you.
I don't remember if I was tired when I wrote it, I may have been but I will go back and rewirte it again. I will try not to give too much information all at once.
Not sure when I will post again but hopefully soon or maybe in October.