I'm Writing

I have always wanted to write stories but I'm not that good. I put an app on my tablet whee I can write and I started but I'm sure it doesn't make any sense and I'm not sure where the story should go.

I will keep writing and see what happens, I don't think I will publish it and my spelling sucks and I have bad grammar.

How does writing come so easy for other people?
I feel like I'm only good enough for work and not for anything else.

Okay I will try t post more later

My writing

This is what I have so far, it's not much but I did do writing and will continue to write this week. Not sure when I will get to post but I hope by next week I will post by Friday.

Oh look it’s your night in shining armor Klohe! I will kill you before you can save her! Hahahaha

As Harper lunged forward with just a pen in her hand at Matt, Matt moved in front of Klohe to protect her. This pen was not an oridinary pen, when Harper plans to kill people the pen magically turns into a sword with 3 blades.

Matt waited to move til the last minute to move out of the way and grab Klohe as he moved. They rolled over to the basement door and rolled down the stairs.

Owwwww! Matt that really hurt and why are we in the basement? Asked Klohe

I know of a way out that Harper doesn’t know about and we need to get out now! Get up and lets go!!!

Matt let go! I am not going anywhere until you tell me what’s going on and why Harper just attacked with a pen sword!!! I want answers and I want them now! Demanded Klohe

I will give you answers but right now we need to keep moving! Harper won’t be stay still till she kills  you and we need to move!

Matt found the hidden door in the basement floor even though all the floor looked like a basement floor in any house but this passageway was special. It had enchantments on to protect Klohe.

Matt lifted the door and grabbed Klohe’s wrist to get her to come along. Klohe resisted and then Matt wrapped his arms around her waist and picked her up and dropped her into the passageway.

Klohe I’m sorry I had to do that but it is nesscary and we need to keep moving. Matt moved the door back into place after he jumped in and covered the rest of the doorway. We need to move and keep moving Klohe! I will give you all the answers when we are far away from Harper.

“This tunnel is protected and we can get to the safe place that you need to be at.”

“And where is that Matt?! You push me down the basement stairs and then you drop me into this tunnel? I’m not going unless you give me answers and apologize for pushing me down the stairs!”

Fine Klohe, I’m sorry for pushing you down the stairs and Harper wants you dead so she can be queen of a city and she also wants your parents in the dungeons till they die.

What? Asked Klohe who was in shock from hearing her parents being in dungeons til they die.

We need to get going and now! Matt grabbed her wrist and started running through the tunnel.

Like I said, it's not much but it's something and I would love feedback of course! If you decide not to leave feedback that is okay too. Thanks for looking and reading my story.

More Writing!

Since my friends mom cleaned the house, I stayed home because I knew she would put me to work on my vacation. I wrote a lot more and hope I have answered some of the questions that some people brought up.

I added a new character, well actually 2 new characters. One is Harper and the other is Nannaoo pronounced nana-ooh but it may change later.
 Well here it is:

“Well then I am Harper, nice to meet you....?” Harper said.


“I am Klohe, nice to meet you too” said Klohe.


With the introductions out of the way, Harper kept staring at the science teacher and Klohe didn’t like it even though she felt comfortable around Harper.


“Did Harper have magical powers?” Klohe thought.


“Class, can I have your attention please?” asked Mr. August


Everyone stopped talking to give Mr. August their full attention. Mr. August was tall and had a bad leg so he walked with a cane. He wore glasses and his hair was dishelved.


“I want to teach you about a legend that was passed down to me by my parents. This legend has a powerful city in it with a royal type family and only they can activate the true power of the city.” Mr. August said.


With this small amount of a legend Mr. August had everyone’s attention. 

When Mr. August smiled, it was in a creepy way but he only smiled at Harper.


 Klohe raised her hand to ask where the city was and she was not called on. 

Klohe didn’t know why Mr. August didn’t call on her but what she did notice was everyone in the class looking straight ahead and not saying a word.


This was unusual for Klohe’s science class because everyone always talked but now they were silent, even Harper was but she was smiling, why?


“I want everyone to take notes on this because there will be a quiz onit later in the week” said Mr. August.


As my parents told me this story, I listened everytime they told it to me. The city is in another dimension and the only way to get there is by a secret entrance only located somewhere in Greece. My parents didn’t know how to get to the secret opening but they told me you need “royal blood”. The royal family rules the city in a polite manner, everyone got along and were happy except for one royal who was not happy. This royal’s name is Nannaoo. She did not like the way this hidden city that is surrounded by water was being ruled.


 Nannaoo wanted to rule differently and make everything dark where nothing would grow and everyone would be miserable. She always liked the dark side of things and she wanted to kill the heir to Silver Star City.


Nannaoo’s brother had found out and left his oldest son in charge so he could take his wife and daughter who was the heir to the city, take them away to safety and wait til the young girl would be old enough to gain her powers and knowledge.


No one knows why the oldest son was left in charge, some say he was very strong and could stand up to Nannaoo but the real challenge was for his sister to put her away for good.


Since the departure of the king and queen and their daughter, no one has seen them or knows where they went. I was told the daughter would gain powers over the waters and be able to control them anyway she would like, she could move mountains and move the city by herself but there is no proof for she has not returned to the city.


Some say Nannaoo has people working for her that like the dark side and say they have tracked down the heir to Silver Star City and will destroy her and her parents to keep everything dark, that is why we keep having rain and no sunshine as my parents would tell me.


“So are there any questions before you go?” asked Mr. August


“Mr. August, if the heir is still alive, how did the story get out?” asked a student finally out of her gaze of zombieness.


“I asked my parents the same thing and they told me they followed a traveler into the city and were told the story by the traveler but in no means, follow strangers” said Mr. August.


Ring....Ring...Ring...


“Off you go now, get to your next class” said Mr. August as the bell rang letting students know they had another class to get to.


Klohe gathered up her things and out of the corner of her eye she could see Harper smile at her evilily, Klohe didn’t know what to make of it but she wanted to find Matt and talk to him about her. Matt may know something about it but she would ask her brother Chris too.


Klohe left the classroom and turned right as she went out the door, she knew Matt was in science class and it was not too far from her class. As she got there Matt walked out.


“Matt, we need to talk right now!” said Klohe very seriously.


“Wow Klohe, nice to see you too but what’s up with you? Matt asked while Klohe was pulling him out into the hallway.


“Sorry Matt but something weird happened in my class and I think you might know about it. Even the teacher is creepy and gives me evil looks plus a new girl named Harper showed up today and she seems to be in love with the teacher.”


“Slow down Klohe and start again, who is Harper?” asked Matt even though he has heard the name somewhere but couldn’t remember where.


“Harper is a new girl but not sure where she is from. She kinda looks like me but has brown eyes and darker brown hair. Even the teacher smiled at her which is weird and he always looks at me from behind his computer.”


“Also my teacher told the class of a legend that his parents told him about a city surrounded bu water and the only way to get there is to find the entrance in Greece.” said Klohe


“I have never heard of that Klo, besides how would the teachers parents know that the secret location is in Greece? I think he made the story up and just wants to test everyone’s brain activity” said Matt


“Why are you so concerned about this legend Klohe?” asked Matt


“I’m not sure, it feels like this hidden city is calling to me, saying help us.......” Klohe trailed off as she had a vision of Harper sitting on a throne chair and ruling the city.

This is what I have done on my vacation, love the feedback and I hope you like it.

Not too Bad

I have been a little stressed out lately, it's over my student loans but I am doing better now. I have done some more writing and will post it up. I hope it makes sense and that I didn't stray from my story line either.

Other than writing, working and sleeping, not much is new but the weather has been nice and it's not humid anymore :). Here is more of my story, if anything was repeated I do apologize.

She remembered why and she still couldn’t figure out the symbols but she pushed it aside and got ready for school. She picked out a long sleeve shirt that was red and a pair of jean pants for school and her hair was straight.

Klohe met up with her friend Mary on the way to school but she didn’t notice because Klohe’s mind was on her family legend.

Why are some of the symbols familar to me? I don’t get it and everytime I look at the symbol for water, I see water not in reality but in my mind and it surrounds me. Why? Thought Klohe.

Hello?! Klohe?!?! Earth to Klohe! said Mary

These thoughts that were running through Klohe’s mind were keeping her up late at night. It made her feel more like herself, like where she belonged and these symbols were calling to her. Finally Klohe noticed her friend Mary trying to get her attention.

Hi Mary, sorry just my “family legend” they both said in unison.

I know Klohe but you really need to give it a rest and study for school, your grades are not that great and if you want to go to Duke University, you need to get your grades up! Besides, how much sleep did you get last night? I can tell you were up late, said Mary.

I know Mary and I was up until 4:20am, Matt gave me a book on legends and my family legen.....

Wait, what?! Matt gave you the book!? Mary asked shocked.
Yes he did, he is not a bad guy Mary! He is my friend and he thought I might like to read up on legends and read about my family’s legend, said Klohe.

Matt is not to be trusted at all and he is only after you because he knows how to manipulate you! You need to stay away from him Klohe! Mary said.

Let me know what you think even if you didn't like it! I am now going to do a few things and relax since I have the weekend off and do more writing.

More Stuff

Well I am here and I forgot my paper to write with since I wanted to do more writing this weekend. It's ok, I think I can still write and keep it safe til I post it here and of course would love feedback too! Always good to have feedback.

Nothing new with me, at Jens house watching Netflix on the PS3 which is nice!!!!! Luke fixed the lock on the door and I am relaxing. Looking at new computers or I should say laptops and found one that I like. The one I like is a MSI, a company I never heard of till Nate said something to me about it.

It is 500 dollars but I have saved 300 so maybe I will get it sooner than later but I will figure something out. Jen is at work and I am here and later watching anime  on the big screen.

So I am going to write and hopefully post it tomorrow or on Monday so you guys can give some feedback. Also Happy July 4th to everyone! Be safe on Monday.

My first page!

So I finally wrote my first page! So here it is but need to remind you that the symbols I added on paper are subject to change so I won't describe them.


First page:

She sat in her room in the late hours of the night, unable to sleep. There was too much on her mind for her to fall asleep and right now she couldn't access the internet because of the rain storm.

Klohe has blue eyes and long brown hair that goes down to her waist and right now she was putting her hair in a pony tail and it was 4:07 am.

Damn legend!!! All it says is "too win the right side of the sword is for good to throw good and evil."

What are these symbols?

Klohe had scanned the legend onto her laptop from a book she had borrowed from a friend. She could not make sense of the symbols or what the legend meant and now that it was 4:20am, it was time for bed.

This is all I have for now but any input would be great and it is a rough draft of one page. I will be working on it more after I get some sleep but will post as I write more.

Writing and Computer is slow

So this is my 3rd attempt at making this post. Anyways I started watching Black Butler and yea Jen is commenting on everything! It is rather annoying.

Anyways is is a japan anime and it is on netflix.

Ok Jen is now in the kitchen which is better and I can explain my idea for writing.  I was thinking of doing a story on a legend but may include the past and present. This way I can mix it up. I just have to put everything on paper and I have one character figured out.

I hope to start some of it tonight before work but I am very tired so I may nap and work on it tomorrow but we will see. I'm not staying long at Jens since I need to do some cleaning and dry my clothes when I get home and I need to make something for my half hour lunch at work tonight.

I work 11pm to 7am shift at a nursing home and i got enough sleep but I am still tired but I could be coming down with something. So yea I am ready for a nap.

So that is all I have to say for that but my computer is kinda slow which is not great but I will have to look at tomorrow when I have more time. I may just need to run a scan and hopefully nothing wrong will show up. Will try to post more even if it is from my phone since I don't have internet at home.